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Pressure on me
I can feel it all around me
Crushing me as I breathe
Until I can't

Aching bodies
Tough as nails
That shoot right through me
Until I bleed

Inferior feelings
Deep within me
That push to be set free
Until I break

Numbed in my head
I feel it there
Waiting to be turned off
And leave me for dead

Pressure
Aching
Inferior
Numbness

I feel the pain
©2008-2009 ~AnaKun13
:iconanakun13:

Author's Comments

This is the result of one word:
Pain

Given to me by :iconalex-thegreat:

Give me a word to work with . . . .

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:iconalex-thegreat:
Guess I found one I nvr commented. Love it as always, specially when the guy that gave you the word is a genius. ;) I love your writing style on this one, not quite so common I guess is what i'm thinking.
:iconanakun13:
yayz 8D

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